If they communicated how they felt or their struggles early on regardless of the contract, they would have been more happy. You can't expect the ML to know everything, he doesn't have superpowers to read minds. As for the FL, I get why she had to hide her son and why she couldn't tell him everything, if only ML communicated more with her. It's hard to express your feelings but it's not fair to the other party when you don't tell them clearly what is on your mind and just make judgement of them. Because if you truly love the person, you trust that whatever you will say, they will understand or try to understand. You wouldn't have loved them if they were the evil person that you perceive them to be right? Unless you were only physically attracted to them and you didn't really love them based on how they are in life. Their love lacked depth and trust that's why what happened, happened.
As for the other stuff that happened, it just felt like it was forced by the writer to add more drama and justify the actions of both sides. The antagonist was very unrealistic. This had a lot of potential but I didn't like that most of the circumstances were forced. The author justified the actions of everyone except the antagonist and just made her pure evil. I would have loved it if the antagonist was made human rather than just being a spawn of the devil.
All in all this was good but could have done better.
If they communicated how they felt or their struggles early on regardless of the contract, they would have been more happy. You can't expect the ML to know everything, he doesn't have superpowers to read minds. As for the FL, I get why she had to hide her son and why she couldn't tell him everything, if only ML communicated more with her. It's hard to express your feelings but it's not fair to the other party when you don't tell them clearly what is on your mind and just make judgement of them. Because if you truly love the person, you trust that whatever you will say, they will understand or try to understand. You wouldn't have loved them if they were the evil person that you perceive them to be right? Unless you were only physically attracted to them and you didn't really love them based on how they are in life. Their love lacked depth and trust that's why what happened, happened.
As for the other stuff that happened, it just felt like it was forced by the writer to add more drama and justify the actions of both sides. The antagonist was very unrealistic. This had a lot of potential but I didn't like that most of the circumstances were forced. The author justified the actions of everyone except the antagonist and just made her pure evil. I would have loved it if the antagonist was made human rather than just being a spawn of the devil.
All in all this was good but could have done better.