no commento on story 2 but I feel like main story was a bit too rushed. Like the couple explained to us that they fell for each other because there was no time to actually show it through the plot. "Show dont tell" is an important rule afterall..
no commento on story 2 but I feel like main story was a bit too rushed. Like the couple explained to us that they fell for each other because there was no time to actually show it through the plot. "Show dont tell" is an important rule afterall..