Chapter 5 Aristoroche+Azare

lilac August 9, 2023 12:16 am

Damn that chapter 5 I feel so bad for the sister, she got nerfed Σ(  ̄□ ̄||) I mean, I guess she wanted it but damnnn still (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜 Also Azare 100% got raped when she was 12 years old #-.-) prince was a fucking sadist i dont like him

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    Inkblot December 7, 2023 6:08 pm

    That story would have been my favorite if not for the sexual assault. Like. I get they were going for an obsessive character, but she was a child and it clearly traumatized her.

    lilac December 8, 2023 2:11 am
    That story would have been my favorite if not for the sexual assault. Like. I get they were going for an obsessive character, but she was a child and it clearly traumatized her. Inkblot

    Right?? Such a weird trope.

    CuriousGumWad July 13, 2024 2:59 am

    Yeah it felt like they could've done more with her sister, I genuinely wanted the sister to have a happy ending, have her enjoy having a healthy body, have a connection to the main girl because it feels like she's finally getting what she's always wanted. I kinda didn't like what they did with the main girl though, I wished they kept her sickly instead of "um actually she was sickly because she had really cool magic powers and when she uses the super mega cool magic powers she's in top notch health" (it also kinda felt a little ableist imo) if she knew that then why didn't she tell her sister in the previous timeline so she could become healthy and if her sister is pretty why didn't she have any other guys surrounding her? It has a common problem of a lot of stories of never challenging the MC in any meaningful way like everything goes her way she gets the hot rich guy, the good looks, the cool powers with no drawbacks etc.

    This story does not pass the bechdel test.