Ch. 36 I had to stop at chapter 36 because I can't do it anymore sincerely, first of all t...

VbX August 7, 2023 4:56 pm

Ch. 36
I had to stop at chapter 36 because I can't do it anymore sincerely, first of all the protagonist, if she's dead and reincarnated, why does she behave like a 7 year old? it doesn't make sense, that's just the main purpose of the re-enactment part, it's not a hashtag you can put because it would be more interesting. I personally love the hastag reincarnation so the fact that isn't used properly, it makes me angry when I see this. don't get me wrong, I don't want any harm against the author an I know it's his work but I just want to give my personal opinion about his and I wish you could fully understand my criticism, also because I think that the fact that she died of frostbite is something that could add a lot of style to the story, also above all the fact that she has already experienced death itself would be very useful to the story. Another last thing that's a bit personal is that, personally, I quite like the male character with black hair, but changing his image drawing him with long hair, it doesn't make sense to me, if I liked the protagonists with long hair, I'd go to read more, I don't understand why change it after 35 ch. For the rest the style is not bad at all even if simple.

Responses
    Yuki August 14, 2023 6:31 am

    Nah. Most of reincarnator they have strong mind but somehow their body give up since they are still baby. Like lotto princess, tyran princess and maby other since there too many todler reincarnator but this one already 7 years so it feel odd they behave like real children. Make