ooh, not bad at all

karossi July 31, 2023 4:07 am

Still very new but so far its pretty good! A character that has obvious OP abilities but he's a total noob so he has to learn from scratch. *** I'm wondering why he had the chubby appearance in the human world? Would that ever be explained??***

There's a goal too so there's already something our MC can work towards. A female character has appeared and she's strong af! She's deffo got an attitude but I do not mind her at all.

The art is really nice so that's always a plus. Overall a great start, can't wait for more!!

Responses
    -delorean- January 26, 2024 4:24 am

    i'm pretty sure the chubby appearance was supposed to be like he was cultivating muscles and stuff doing all the sports and then when he awakened it all shed instantly into like muscles and power idk it sounds kinda dumb but his mother says in the first 1/2 chapter that he has the perfect physique for growing muscles so i guess that's what it was eluding to when he awakened

    karossi January 28, 2024 12:57 am
    i'm pretty sure the chubby appearance was supposed to be like he was cultivating muscles and stuff doing all the sports and then when he awakened it all shed instantly into like muscles and power idk it sounds ... -delorean-

    Yeah since they never officially addressed it I told myself it's what contained all his goblin powers haha

    still think it's an interesting way to go about it but it's super minor to the story so I'm not bothered