Yikes sorry for long rant

ken July 29, 2023 10:06 am

I’m sorry but her constant back and forth to “I love my brothers” to completely withdrawing is annoying. I get she’s traumatized from her past but yet she needs to pick one, be cold or be nice. They’re people too who don’t deserve indecisive treatment. Also, why is she kissing up to the guy who ruins her family? She literally gains nothing from it. She went from powerful assassin to being afraid of being hit from another kid yet fought an adult crazy woman.

They’re dimming her down just for the sake of drama yet it unravels the entire plot that was established from the beginning. She wanted to train her siblings yet just does side quests to lead up to it, she can just tell him train and he listens to everything she says. It’s easy. His self esteem is low, not his drive. If he had no drive he wouldn’t even keep trying or be so self condescending. I hate the route this is going.

It really just feels like they’re adding in plot twists just for the sake of it, like they just read a bunch of isekais and added every aspect into one story. The numerous possessions, an evil baby, the potential ml being the reason her family fails and essentially dies out in the potential future. The misunderstandings aren’t drawn out and it’s usually resolved by a weird plot hole next chapter which makes another misunderstanding happen, it’s so frustrating and the translations don’t make it even better.

Responses
    Gup July 29, 2023 5:32 pm

    100% agree with everything you said

    Yuki July 29, 2023 11:32 pm

    Dont forget abt bad translation it make the story worsed

    ken July 29, 2023 11:44 pm
    Dont forget abt bad translation it make the story worsed Yuki

    Yes they’re bad but not ineligible, the art flow also tells the backstory.