i’m gnna be honest

saturnus July 28, 2023 11:13 pm

this story is legit going nowhere. i don’t even remember the main plot of this story. the relationship between cirrus and skylar was always going to happen but it legit seems like it’s coming out of nowhere, there’s no chemistry and nothing at all between them. idek how they even became anything similar to being friends. the only thing this story has going for it anymore is it’s art and that’s it

Responses
    SADBOYSANGWOO July 29, 2023 12:15 am

    I see what you mean, it went from a stalker and his creepy photo collection and a psycho who wants to have power over people to this buuuuut I think the author is just trying to show how these characters became that way through glimpses into their past. it's likely all a build up to them opening up to each other
    needing eventually understanding each other and maybe a real relationship forming? Just 2 desperate depressed lonely people no chemistry needed just a future of codependency and toxic vibes ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

    saturnus July 29, 2023 3:34 pm
    I see what you mean, it went from a stalker and his creepy photo collection and a psycho who wants to have power over people to this buuuuut I think the author is just trying to show how these characters becam... SADBOYSANGWOO

    yeah i get that fr, but it rlly js seems all over the place ykwim?? i’m sure there’s better ways to show that too and i have no problem with how the authors showing how the two became how they are now through backstories but when we move forward to present time it js feels like i missed a few chapters on where they even came remotely close to eachother. i really did like the story at the beginning but rn i’m js hella confused cl