This is bad

Shades July 27, 2023 11:26 pm

I feel like the author is trying to make the story slightly different from the generic story of this genre, but it was done badly.

The party kicked him out to protect him since they care for him, and do not want to see him die, which is fine, but the way they kicked him out of the party was really bad.

Still, that's not what made the story bad, what made the story bad for me, was when the MC opened the door to the girl room. Why do japanese like to add that kind of crap in their stories so often. it is forcing misunderstanding in the story, in a really stupid way.

Responses
    [email protected] July 27, 2023 9:40 pm

    Its one of those stories where they make the Mc naive obsessive childish sensetive lil kid and then authors tries as much as possible to wrong the Mc through misunderstanding and lack of communication till he becomes the Badguy . And when comes back the truth will be revealed and the Mc will feel even more like sht.

    The real Villian in this story is 100% Authors. They purposely made Mc look bad and even made him like a creep who conatanlty follow female lead inhealthy amount to make the Mc itself a problematic creep.

    Whats even more concerning is how author is purposly shiping the Old guy to Female lead.

    Poor classic Mc is literally made to be unlikable

    Kon_Rice August 11, 2023 10:41 am

    And the author was even portraying Est as such an annoying character too... I dont if he’s gonna become a villain tho...