Responses
I agree with having more depth in the part of his realization. Maybe it's the translation but his resolve wasn't that convincing???
I also felt there was a point when everytjing came down way too fast, forst he hated the seme's guts but then got drunk, flirted and fell in love, I was really invested but I lost it there.
The story is so so to me, bcs the uke being jealous which is understandable and all but then making it seems like it's the seme's fault when the seme is just there doing his job and loving him is a bit irritating. Idk, I think it's need more depth in the part of uke's realization???