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BeeHive July 25, 2023 7:33 pm

Bro the author skip and simplify bunch of plot to fit this in 40 chap - kudos for that, but, still, the story definitely lacks concrete plot that should have been there. Even the relationship between main characters is heavily skip. like we get the black hair dude fell in love in first sight at the river but why would the orange dude like the black hair dude back when they barely even interact??? Also what about the son and daughter that they should have ? Is the fortune teller and whatever the mother in law did is a scam afterall or did their daughter and son got turned into a wolf (lmao). Anyway it feel so empty like reading a story board instead of the final product.

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