Literally every thought I had. For me personally what would make the story more interesting is Jae jackass losing his title as champion and going into a new arc in the story. Would like him to kinda break down.
I couldn´t have formulated it better. I ranked this story 2 stars, simply because the artstyle is good. Idk why i keep reading bc it really sucks, maybe i have hope that it could get better? But honestly even if it does, the start is too fucked up so it wouldn´t change a thing.
And I agree with the nipple play, it´s ridiculous. Nobody can come just from that, it feels good ok but to come? Lmao
Have no arguments about the protection.
Comment is fot the nips causing orgasm. It is highly possible.. as a very kinky person, I've seen and heard people cumming from non sexual activities. I, for example, orgasms during my regular waxing session. Especially when getting Brazilian wax
Have no arguments about the protection.
Comment is fot the nips causing orgasm. It is highly possible.. as a very kinky person, I've seen and heard people cumming from non sexual activities. I, for example, orgasms during my regular waxing session. Especially when getting Brazilian wax.
Sir, thanks to this comic, I’m in physical and mental pain
So, I agree in everything single thing with you
I cant totally see your point, youre totally right but iam talking about dan who isnt even intrested in sex so he isnt kinky. But yeah youre right, thank you for the correction.
Can you chilllll with the PLOT thing? This book is slow paced(obviously) you can't just expect development immediately, I mean look at the characters and their personalities. In my opinion, this book will probably pass 100 chapters and mingwa is doing a very good job in making it this slow-paced. You can't expect the plot to transpire instantly, or feelings to pop out of no where suddenly. It starts from somewhere you know. And besides, if you want to start seeing a PLOT I feel the book won't be that much interesting tbvh. Let's remain calm and go with the flow.
Also I don't agree with you saying jk is a rapist (he isn't fcs). You can't really identify what he did with dan as RAPE. Stop calling it rape. Check your dic please. ლ(´ڡ`ლ)
Is this your first time reading a bl manhwa??? （￣へ￣）
Okay what now? "You cant expect development immediately" ofc that is true but you missed my point; the characters are SHALLOW. They are boring, stereotypical and hard to watch, its not about the "slow-pace" at all.
And again; this isnt even slow paced its standing still without moving? We had two sex episodes back to back; thats not a plot. I dont see personality from either of them, they dont have depth. I cant see them as individuals and when something like that isnt seen in a book/comic it gets boring.
And "can you chill with the plot"? What am i supposed to criticise then? Their sex scenes? A story is a PLOT. And a smut story needs a plot to be intresting, the only reason a smut story is considered a story bcuz it give depth to the characters which makes the intercourse scenes fun and exciting. This comic feels like a porno; and we have a whole hub for that.
You thought you did something did you huh? Girl i am gay myself and i read a fair share of bl manhwa to understand a good plot when i see one. And girlie this one just ISNT IT.
It´s not slow paced. It´s lazy(bad) writing. A story is supposed to be interesting from start to finish, you shouldn´t even need to find it excuses. It feels like naruto fillers except it´s smut, like cmon i think YOU are the one with very little reading experience.
And btw Jk IS a rapist. How many times has the protagonist said they were enjoying the sex? 0 if i recall correctly. How many times was he forced into it? Every fkn time. You have your answer.
Rape isn´t just a violent guy threatening you in a back alley you know? As soon as someone says they´re scared, that they feel pain or just "wait" and the other person doesn´t stop: that´s rape. But it´s so normalized in yaois that you don´t even recognize it anymore.
Lol the characters are shallow, boring, stereotypical and hard to watch to YOU(Be specific!). You definitely do not understand, do you? Them having too much sex is part of the plot boyie... You don't even understand how a plot goes because if you do, you won't be saying this lol XD. Depth? You don't see them as individuals? Mehn you do know there are many people like Dan and jk in real life. Are you even on earth?
Feel free to criticize because I can see that's what you're best at doing. A story is a PLOT obviously and sex can be part of IT. I'm still wondering if this is your first bl manhwa because you're so unto hating this story like. I feel you should find a story fitting for you because you keep on complaining. Relax boyie...
Oh and this; “ the only thing we got out of this chapter was that jae wears glasses; he has trouble sleeping; that he sometimes watches B&W porn when he cant sleep.” it's so obvious you hate jk( I mean everyone hates him for being a red flag) but yours is sooo excessive. We got so many information from this chapter, what are you even reading?
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Wow omg you're gay!!! Don't care. You can be gay and still not read that much manhwa. If you can't read the book why don't you just STOP? It's that simple. Just admit you want to see the character development like everyone else. The excess hate is so unnecessary at this point like boyyy chillllllll(≧∀≦)
Oxford definition: the crime of forcing somebody to have sex when they are not able to agree to it.
You can't refer what jk did to dan as RAPE. Get the point!
Oh and about the so called bad writing you talked about, I totally disagree with you. It seems you're into romance, that's so cute but the story ISN’T for YOU at all. Please, omg, this story is not only about romance. DID you even read the Sypnosis? My Gosh!
Dan is in no position to refuse sex. I won´t argue with a child any longer. If you can´t understand that he has a monetary hold on Dan(he literally paid off all of his debts and his grandma´s treatments), then you are rly dumb. If he refuses him sex he will literally have to reimburse every single penny, which he can´t cuz he´s poor. What don´t you understand? They literally signed a fucking contract. You´re really dense
I mean what did you even expect? The clichè love romantic bl stories you've only read. Go read a story more of your type please. You're just hating for no good reason, Hilarious XD
Ohh one more thing, IT IS SLOW-PACED.(obviously)
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Oh honey i´m not hating, just being lucid here. And if you take a look at my lists you´ll see i don´t read only romance LMAO. It might make you understand that with how many stories i´ve read maybe i´m onto something? But keep sucking the author´s dick maybe you'll be featured in the next chapter haha
Okay let's unpack this chapter.
My point is proven again. Dan is insanely afraid of jae's judgement; he cant express himself or oppose any of his ideas since he is afraid to get hit/or wtvs other reason there is. After unnecessary peer pressure from jae; dan expresses a huge problem in their sex-relationship which is **protection** he give off an excuse which is being uncomfortable whenever jae does the deed in his ass.
And omfg do i think jae is a dumb hoe. Bro really said "you wouldnt get pregnant" to a man
And other than that; HIV??? Sex-diseases?? (Raws can lead to HIV-1 and HIV-2 which ends us with AIDS) and lets be honest; doenst jae already have all these diseases since he is an open slut?
And why tf didnt dan just pull the disease card for him to use a condom? Isnt he a doctor, or since he is a bottom that doenst matter? (jae wouldve said no too imo)
And jae is such a self-centered peice of shit, he doenst give two flying fucks if dan is uncomfortable or not (we got that across long ago but still) he only wnats a hole only, (i mean at this point just get a sex toy dude.)
Okay lets take a different approach; lets say those diseases dont exist in this world (which i think is VERY dumb and lazy; it makes the adults look childish and irresponsible) the excuse dan gave was solid, he didnt have to even give an excuse; its his body and his choice how the sex goes. And tbh if dan does all the work to clean himself up (which he deosnt like) the least jae could do is be an adult and wear a condom.
Okay we are not quite done with the sex ed yet.
I am a gay man; and i have never came across a man that can get off from only his nips (from only his ass too) and especially if they are an inexperienced person like dan; i mean if dan was in a romantic relationship with jae; it might work? (Most unlikely) but jae is humiliating him, raping him and dan has no positive or sexy thoughts to stimulate ejaculating (they didnt show us any thoughts too) so it really makes no sense that inexperienced (probs not gay) man like dan can fully ejaculate from nipple play
Id like to add one more thing; men dont normally have sensitive nipples; (and if they did it wont lead to cumming) so dan having them is such a cliche thing to have. (Nipple play is mostly use to give an over-stimulation, not to fully amke someone ejaculate, thats unrealistic af and really stupid)
Now that we are done with the sex ed; lets take about the minor details. Some ppl are saying that jae was jealous when dan mentioned potato. I dont believe so; it mostly look/feel like as if his tower of power has been shaken. You see, jae sees dan as his sex toy and him seeing his sex toy having feelings and forming ideas and friendships is weird to him. Jae cant see people as individuals, He sees them as something that can help/assist him, since he is a narc.
Now the new character; i have two theories. He wants to fight jae for the championship and he falls inlove with dan and tries to win him over *OR* he was jae's ex and he wants to get him back. (Either by fucking him or fucking him up)
In conclusion this new character is only here to make Someone jealous; (i truly hope it isnt dan)
Someone said that the new character looks like dan; which i agree to. It makes me think that either jae has a type for blonde twink men *OR* that he misses his ex alot and he dated dan since he looks like him.
Okay one more last thing and ill kindly leave; two sex chapters??? dude we want a PLOT. This deadass is a porn comic, the only thing we got out of this chapter was that jae wears glasses; he has trouble sleeping; that he sometimes watches B&W porn when he cant sleep.
We got a new character (which ill make the fight, that he is equally toxic)
In conclusion, this comic is making me lose hope in humanity. And tbh every charcter in this comic is shallow af, they dont feel like real ppl (there is no appeal to continue reading this dumpster fire)
We are all out here waiting for ANYONE to be interesting. Dan is lame. Jae is an asshole. And the new guy is pretty. End of story.