This is the WORST yaoi I've read in my entire life. If a meteorite swooped in, wiped every...

Chuuya July 20, 2023 11:29 am

This is the WORST yaoi I've read in my entire life. If a meteorite swooped in, wiped everyone out and the author wrote the end, I'd cheer!!! Seriously, the author is a shitty story teller. They're a lovely artist, but the story is so terrible. You can randomly start the story at chapter 1, or chapter 30, or chapter 54 etc, and the story will still be the same. Rinse and Reapeat! That's the author's mantra. I actually stopped reading this webtoon at chapter 20-something and restarted again at chapter 70. GUESS what, I skipped 50 chapters but didn't even miss anything from the story .

What's very disappointing is that it started with an interesting premise that was very curious. We had this young man who produces pearls in his scrotum and they come out when he ejaculates. Using this premise, the autbor could have gone down the route of a mythical adventure love story.

For example, why not have the Uke meet the Seme, they both go on a question searching mission about his condition. There, they find out the Uke's father is a god of clams who in his young years fell in love with a human woman but because of duty he left her and his first child in the human world. Unforseen circumstances after this revelation forces the Uke to inherit his father throne, after his dad mysteriously goes into a slumber he can't awake from. For drama, he's pushed to pick between the Seme and his duty, like the choice his father had to make with him and his mother. Whilst he's struggling with this decision, he's also dealing with not fitting in with his fathers world, just like he didnt fit in with the human world. This conflict with an eventual resolution is what the author could have explored over 80 chapters. Meanwhile, in the side lines, the seme tries to help his uke boyfriend navigate these new circumstances in this strange world and be his pillar of strength and love despite being a human. The whole perl thing could have led to an interesting story. But what do we get instead? Rape fest!!!

Responses
    Kriss July 20, 2023 12:27 pm

    The way I literally started on like chapter 60 a few weeks ago, and I understand everything. lmaooo I’m not even going to bother going to the beginning. I just want to see how it ends. lol