hmm

Langria July 19, 2023 10:07 pm

doesnt seem too bad but kinda cliche
all the action scenes are predictable since its just fight monster > win overwhelmingly > get some of his original power back

i feel like this would be better if it had some sort of uniqueness to the plot, like the mc being childish or dumb (since he has the education of a middle schooler); or anything really

overall its alright; i like this trope but with how many ive read so far, this just feels like another copy paste with the typical
'my family was caring for me while i was a veggie, im op, i pop off in hunter exam, i save the op girl, everyone wants to recruit me, theres an evil guy who has ties with the devil, i beat them up, i protect the world'

Responses
    ⭐may July 25, 2023 12:07 pm

    You got it right before I even reach ch10 I know someone is going to appear and have ties with the devil

    anabonnana January 14, 2024 1:16 pm

    But how will he be childish if he's been in hell for 80 years? He's not gonna have the innocence of a normal middle schooler.

    Langria May 22, 2024 8:53 pm
    But how will he be childish if he's been in hell for 80 years? He's not gonna have the innocence of a normal middle schooler. anabonnana

    i havent read the manga since a year ago so im not sure how it developed but when i wrote this, i meant childish in the sense that he lacked social interaction; just an example of a unique characteristic ^^