That is not male lead, but the villain.
Not necessarily. Especially given the setup of this story.
Im noy defending this its shitty, but the first introduced youngmaster is the villain his brother is ml just saying
Oh no, no worries. I didn't think you were defending it. XD
Did you read the novel or something for you to know that? Because for stories with THIS setup, you usually get a horrible dude and a nice dude but the woman still picks the jackass over the decent guy because he has a sliver of a change of personality (maybe, it's not even a given for this badly written plot tbh).
Plus, this is basically badly written porn (hence the thread title I picked) so it's even MORE likely that the first guy that shows up is indeed the ML. Especially with how the artist draws him and gives him enough screentime (villains usually do not get those).
She usually picks a jackass but not THIS level of jackass. A different type, maybe. I don't think he'll be the male lead here
Maybe she's going for the ultra jackass. Just to 'spicy things up'? Anything is possible at this point. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
No 2nd and 3rd chapter show she is being sexualy? Abused my the youngmaster and the brother(ml) being an outcast woth a burn scar on his face, andbthey decide to elope(?) Im not sure it's too fast paced
Well, here's hpoin he's not a worthless rat as well then. And that the writing gets better....it really needs better writing.
Yeah, it's VERY rushed. As I said: like a string of scenes just glued together to get to the dick sucking parts as quick as possible. That's never a good basis for stories, tho it's almost the rule for Josei x Smut stories.
It's because it is obviously a promotion be it of the novel or the artist, it's a 5 chapters story and the plot is very cool and cute, as it is a promotion I prefer a rushed story who tells everything we need to know than a incomplete one
They gave enfasis to the sex as much as they gave in how much mc was being abused her hole life and what happens for her to believe she is worthless, that culminated in the scene of her wanting to leave cuz she was disfigured and ML showing her that it didn't matter cuz she also loved a person like her (ML also had a "I am worthless" personality and a disfigured face still she never trough it made him less>>>>then her "flaws" didn't make her less....some people tend to forgive others flaws while being uncapable to forgive their own, it's relatable, and it was a good character construction and development for a short story) and then wyada wyada get married wyada wyada everyone cover their faces (probably so there will be no judgement of faces and scars and people be judged by their character)
Also note that the villain abuse scenes were cut of and dry where ML and MC scenes had context before and after, purpose and more panels to express something
I think artist showed all their talent with the chapters and panels they were given (remembering most artist are given limits) I am also not a fan of MC type of personality (I call it "saint-like children personality") but she was being constantly humiliated her personality makes sense for her environment (shame/rage/sadness anything who makes your heart beat faster gives you a blushed cheek if you are prone to it, my bf blushes to literally anything including when he have to wait in a line cuz he is impatient, most people have a hot face when crying/stressed)
50 Shades of Grey was already a failure in depicting that sorta female fantasy...this one fails even more.
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It's annoying how she's constantly blushing like she took aphrodisics and just seems like a brainless cocksleeve. Giving her even a hint of personality or emotion besides 'blushing and hesitant' would have been nice.
I know that's all there is to this plot, but come on. At least TRY to make it decent. There is plenty options to make these settings decent, if you put in effort. But this feels more like a quickly strung together change of scenes to get to dick sucking. It's not entertaining nor erotic what with the ML being a total worthless rat and the FL being a dumb slut (from what it seems). Maybe they tried to make it a bad boy master x easy-reader-selfinsert but even there it fails miserably since the characters are neither properly introduced nor do they feel like fleshed out characters. It's like the author based their character on 'hot jackass' and 'cockhungry slut maid'. It's NOT a good startout for a story. But i should have expected this from the Josei x Smut combo. It's basically content made for and done by tired housewives too tired to even think of a decent story (per statistics anyway).
Dropped even after the first chapter. There is nothing decent here for me. Maybe newer readers who don't care about good story telling and fleshed out characters can like it, but for someone with a decade and more of reading quality works, this is probably something to ignore. Unless you really have no other option to get your rocks off, I suppose.
Not even the artwork can save it for me since it's mid and there's not even effort put into making at least angles or overall detail special and focused.
I'm still hoping to find a good version of 50SoG but this is a failed attempt. Which is sad since the mediaval, Master x Maid setup is very interesting. ;v;