Not bad. The plot is a little disjointed. You're plopped down in the middle of a partial revenge plot without knowing the history or what led up to the incident. Plus, you never see the MC become who he is in the story; he arrives and just is. Despite all that, I'm interested to see what's going to happen next.
Not bad. The plot is a little disjointed. You're plopped down in the middle of a partial revenge plot without knowing the history or what led up to the incident. Plus, you never see the MC become who he is in the story; he arrives and just is. Despite all that, I'm interested to see what's going to happen next.