But Yarichin is a COMEDY and an absurd one, I always felt that Yarichin was a Porn with plot kind of story and to be fair, it had really interesting stuff at the begining, Daisy Jelousy is more like her older histories, mostly serious and thats why is dissappointing because sensei used to be really good handling them but when I was reading this is like it wasn't her, idk they feel very dramatic but the resolution feels rushed, the latest chapters of Yarichin are also lacking in quality, I wonder if sensei is in a creative block or something.
Yarichin was ok Lol, if you sell something as comedy and porn you are expected to deliver that, same with a kids show , you can't put stuff that aren't good for the people reading or watching it, because is going to be disliked, like, overly complicated stuff is going to be boring for kids. You need to think what they want and like.
In fact Yarichin NOW is getting bad too, lol, because every chapter is shorter and without substance or development, something that older chapters had.
Daisy Jelousy wasn't like Yaribu, it was serious from the star but everything came crashing down from a chapter to another, the feelings didn't feel consistent and even the sexual tension and "Jelousy" based drama was all over the place.
I respect sensei but this story was a mess.
This is probably the worst work from Sensei, it definetely lacks her spark, the first chapter was SO GOOD and had a lot of potential for drama, but by the second ch, everything went so fast and now the dark haired guy is IN LOVE with the guy he hated??? Renai Ruby wasn't the best either but did this plot better because it was mostly for comedy but in this one is supposed to be serious.
I'll finish reading it but is not what a expected.