My hip hurts.

um- July 22, 2021 6:05 am

This used to be one of my favorites, and tbh I can see why, but at the same time, I can't. I'm a writer, and the way certain things were written like the fish bowl plot was amazing, but the more you went into the story, the more you saw wasted potential. It could've been amazing with or without more chapters, but the author just had to add certain things in to make it an abusive circle. Highly disappointed in this, but on another note, I have literally never seen the fourth wall been broken so many times in one story lmao

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    Whinnie July 24, 2021 6:04 am

    I- did you say you were a writer?? excuse the fact I was being a stalker, YOU WRITE TOO?? omfg, you’re perfect LMFAO

    on a side note, I have to agree with you, I remember both falling head over heels for bits of this but also getting miserably disappointed that they didn’t tug on all my heart strings and take advantage of all the opportunities in their hand for this story :,)

    um- July 24, 2021 6:36 am
    I- did you say you were a writer?? excuse the fact I was being a stalker, YOU WRITE TOO?? omfg, you’re perfect LMFAOon a side note, I have to agree with you, I remember both falling head over heels for bits o... Whinnie

    YES TY

    Whinnie July 24, 2021 6:42 am
    YES TY um-

    no problem!! :))