Responses
These couple chapters where Daniel came into the story, he totally set himself as a default cringe… his cringeyness has spread to Litia now… it’s so cringey that I want it end soon like, stop these cringes and get back to the plot!
They really dropped all the other love interests as soon as Daniel walked into the story forgot the names but the Knight should really be ml he had the most chemistry with fl and the most character development from dislike to pure love
Daniel being the ml feels forced and tbh a bit toxic (I cant be 100% sure on the toxic thing because the translations been a bit hard to understand subtext and emotion) but like in every other chapter hes talking about killing her and like the way he talks to her and about her feels like manipulation and something more sinister
I dont hate plot points like that that the ml plans to kill fl then falls in love but in this particular story it just seems forced and almost like its going nowhere? Its just the same thing on loop chapter to chapter I personally would also like some plot points of problems/ solutions that connect to her old life or the novel she's in
I think this was a 10/10 story but the execution with Daniel being introduced and interacting with fellow characters fell through a bit
I still like the story and will keep reading i just hope they can pull it back a bit
And in regards to translation I really appreciate the hard work the translator is putting in it is a little bit hard to understand the flow of the story sometimes but their trying their best and its not the worst translation I've ever witnessed im always thankful fir people who translate because its not something I could do and it means I get to enjoy these manhwas and webtoons