I like it but I feel like too much is going on

Nefarious000 July 19, 2021 8:08 pm

I like it but I feel like too much is going in at once? What do you guys think?

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    AllMadHere July 19, 2021 8:18 pm

    The sudden reveal about the whole Elizabeth lily backstory was... Way too soon ? I don't know what motivated it, but i could have done without it for many more chapters, or would have liked it better if we only saw fractions of it :/ now, i'm a lot less curious about the plot.

    Nefarious000 July 19, 2021 10:02 pm
    The sudden reveal about the whole Elizabeth lily backstory was... Way too soon ? I don't know what motivated it, but i could have done without it for many more chapters, or would have liked it better if we only... AllMadHere

    Same!! It came too soon!
    Its too much for a beginning of a story but i kinda see where they are going