The font needs some work and using Internet slang when a character is talking is a big no especially if the story is set in a older time frame the art needs work but u have the right concept and idea and I LOVE your character designs
Well ... the author draws better than me.. So
OMG sorry it's the wrong comment T T
it's ok!
The font needs some work and using Internet slang when a character is talking is a big no especially if the story is set in a older time frame the art needs work but u have the right concept and idea and I LOVE your character designs