The first story is kinda bland and doesn't make sense to me like how the uke just followed a stranger like that. I know it's curiosity but still strange that he suddenly took an interest and being pushy towards the seme. I can't feel how they fell in love at all. Don't like it.
The second story is fine, better than the first one. We can see the room for development.
The first story is kinda bland and doesn't make sense to me like how the uke just followed a stranger like that. I know it's curiosity but still strange that he suddenly took an interest and being pushy towards the seme. I can't feel how they fell in love at all. Don't like it.
The second story is fine, better than the first one. We can see the room for development.
The third story is cute, I love it.