It feels like one of those dot to dot games. The story is just going from major point to point. As a result it's hard to even tell how much time has passed it its getting all the plots and goals to feel messy.
Not just you. I can't find a coherent thread anywhere, other than I definitely do not trust her father, Vienna or the silver-haired prince ... but her previous life story made that clear enough anyway.
It seems the Author is a little bit of having the 'Slideshow syndrome' - I can tell as a writer myself, and this Slideshow syndrome is a thing in the writer community, where you try to string events together but with not coherent bridge to support those events into one coherent story. The plot just doesn't flow as nicely as others.
is it just me or does this story seems be jumping around?? I feel as though there are missing parts to it