Extremely beautiful and fantastic style. Loose painterly and chromatic style really left a stunning impression!! My only critique would be that although it was stunning visually, the plot and narrative was almost too symbolic and cryptic to the point where it leaves the reader perpetually unable to grasp and the plot. But it definetely has a different way of telling a story. You have to look through the beautiful chaotic strokes to the perfectly rendered faces--which worked well to match the chaos of the story's theme of pollution, corruption, and overall apocalyptic-esq chaos. Great composition and webcomic-like paneling. Great use of color, angle, perspective, and light. That being said, the story would be more effective with a bit more grasp on creating clarity in the writing a little more so one doesn't get so lost in the analogies and understanding of the meaning of both the words, all while determining the content of the imagery. Overall a more visual piece I would say. I look forward to seeing the artist's other work (: Wonderfully promising (๑•ㅂ•)و✧ Delicious food for the eyes!
Extremely beautiful and fantastic style. Loose painterly and chromatic style really left a stunning impression!! My only critique would be that although it was stunning visually, the plot and narrative was almost too symbolic and cryptic to the point where it leaves the reader perpetually unable to grasp and the plot. But it definetely has a different way of telling a story. You have to look through the beautiful chaotic strokes to the perfectly rendered faces--which worked well to match the chaos of the story's theme of pollution, corruption, and overall apocalyptic-esq chaos. Great composition and webcomic-like paneling. Great use of color, angle, perspective, and light. That being said, the story would be more effective with a bit more grasp on creating clarity in the writing a little more so one doesn't get so lost in the analogies and understanding of the meaning of both the words, all while determining the content of the imagery. Overall a more visual piece I would say. I look forward to seeing the artist's other work (: Wonderfully promising (๑•ㅂ•)و✧ Delicious food for the eyes!