Rushed

Sleepy_doggo July 11, 2021 8:31 am

Is it just me who thinks this story is being rushed?

Responses
    ChuYang July 11, 2021 8:33 am

    Why would it be rushed? Usually people think flashbacks are torturously slow.....

    (✿❛◡❛) July 11, 2021 8:43 am

    Yes?

    Sleepy_doggo July 11, 2021 9:05 am

    No i think they suddenly showed cossete's power and now suddenly they are saying keira will be beheaded. Keira didn’t even do anything. So i thought it's rushed.

    Sleepy_doggo July 11, 2021 9:05 am

    Oh! Someone is thinking all these?

    ChuYang July 11, 2021 9:18 am
    No i think they suddenly showed cossete's power and now suddenly they are saying keira will be beheaded. Keira didn’t even do anything. So i thought it's rushed. Sleepy_doggo

    It was already explained in-depth in the starting chapters of the story so it definitely would be repetitive if it was explained again. That's what I think.

    Local simp July 11, 2021 2:25 pm
    No i think they suddenly showed cossete's power and now suddenly they are saying keira will be beheaded. Keira didn’t even do anything. So i thought it's rushed. Sleepy_doggo

    Chapters 41-43 were flashbacks. In the present mc and coochie just met for the "first" time.