Hi updater!! a little tip

By no means am i part of a scanlation team, im just privately into it. ive done very little typesetting and ceaning before. I recommend you try centering the text boxes, might make it easier to fit the words into those tight boxes. maybe a smaller general font (as these text boxes seem to be tiny). and when you have dark text with a dark background, try using a white letter glow around the text to make them a bit more elligible. I think you're cleaning on pg.4 was pretty well done for the first half. though of course, i feel like cleaning is a lugxury when you're working on a project on your own. it's quite time consuming if you dont know what youre doing. plus with all the textures in the series, super hard to clean. And maybe proofreading?? there was a translation on pg.4 that didnt make sense to me at all.

BUTT other those tips, i think you did a good job. the general ghist of the chapter came accross. some details were lost in translation though. Thank you for the update!! im not sure what system you use, but i used photoshop prior. so these are recommendations based off of that system i dabbled with.