That's IT. For the MAIN COUPLE, it is okay because their issues resolved somehow, but the pacing seems random. (However, the story has POTENTIAL seriously, it is just the flow I guess).
For the side couple, well, the BISEXUAL SEME is an ASSHOLE AND INSENSITIVE SHIT. WELL, I DO NOT HAVE ISSUES FOR BEING CLOSETED, BUT HIS POV IS SO FUCKING OFF. IT GIVES THE BI BAD NAMES CUZ OF THIS CHARACTERIZATION. FOR THE UKE, I HOPE HE IS STRONG-WILLED ONE. OVERALL, THEIR ISSUES ARE STILL UNRESOLVED LIKE WHAT IF ONE OF THEM ARE BEING OUTED, WHAT ARE GONNA DO? WELL, THE BI SEME STATEMENT, AT THE END I DO NOOTTT AGREEEEE. THAT IS ALL.
That's IT. For the MAIN COUPLE, it is okay because their issues resolved somehow, but the pacing seems random. (However, the story has POTENTIAL seriously, it is just the flow I guess).
For the side couple, well, the BISEXUAL SEME is an ASSHOLE AND INSENSITIVE SHIT. WELL, I DO NOT HAVE ISSUES FOR BEING CLOSETED, BUT HIS POV IS SO FUCKING OFF. IT GIVES THE BI BAD NAMES CUZ OF THIS CHARACTERIZATION. FOR THE UKE, I HOPE HE IS STRONG-WILLED ONE. OVERALL, THEIR ISSUES ARE STILL UNRESOLVED LIKE WHAT IF ONE OF THEM ARE BEING OUTED, WHAT ARE GONNA DO? WELL, THE BI SEME STATEMENT, AT THE END I DO NOOTTT AGREEEEE. THAT IS ALL.