Kinda disappointed with the manga's pacing, ngl. The story really had potential and then i...

Izzy July 5, 2021 9:55 am

Kinda disappointed with the manga's pacing, ngl. The story really had potential and then it zoomed through building the relationship at mach speed??? then just,,, gave him a gun???? only to take it away immediately???? like?????????

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    Aslanvicchan July 5, 2021 12:18 pm

    For me it's too fast. I mean, they could have atleast made it better and not just "I like you and you like me too so let's date".

    Cori July 13, 2021 5:16 am
    For me it's too fast. I mean, they could have atleast made it better and not just "I like you and you like me too so let's date". Aslanvicchan

    LMAO it’s the fact that you can’t realize that he only agreed to date so that he wouldn’t leave his life so basically treat their relationship as still growing (as you can see he is starting to ACTUALLY develop feelings) how can you say it is too fast? easily don’t read..

    Izzy July 13, 2021 9:46 am
    LMAO it’s the fact that you can’t realize that he only agreed to date so that he wouldn’t leave his life so basically treat their relationship as still growing (as you can see he is starting to ACTUALLY d... Cori

    bro that’s not canon that’s your interpretation and even if the author makes it canon later on there’s still the fact she put a fucking gun in his hand with no warning only to take it away again lmaoooo

    Cori July 13, 2021 5:58 pm
    bro that’s not canon that’s your interpretation and even if the author makes it canon later on there’s still the fact she put a fucking gun in his hand with no warning only to take it away again lmaoooo Izzy

    i don’t understand your whole opinion about the gun thing.. the gun was there because a guard left it and he took it because he was mad

    Izzy July 13, 2021 8:48 pm
    i don’t understand your whole opinion about the gun thing.. the gun was there because a guard left it and he took it because he was mad Cori

    From a writer’s perspective, you don’t generally want to escalate the story so quickly because it looks ramshackle and too sudden, you want to at least give some foreshadowing or build up to it so it feels more realistic. And if you /do/ for some reason raise it super quick, immediately descalating by taking it away again without consequence basically negates any point of giving it in the first place. It’s just poor writing, when I had really high hopes for a cute, well written storyline where a fat character gets appreciated instead of stereotyped and an abused character gets the love they deserve. But oh well, such is life.

    Cori July 14, 2021 12:20 am
    From a writer’s perspective, you don’t generally want to escalate the story so quickly because it looks ramshackle and too sudden, you want to at least give some foreshadowing or build up to it so it feels ... Izzy

    ok bro go read a novel (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜

    Izzy July 14, 2021 10:36 am
    ok bro go read a novel (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜 Cori

    Sorry I didn’t mean to hold your manga to standards lmao my mistake

    Cori July 14, 2021 4:39 pm
    Sorry I didn’t mean to hold your manga to standards lmao my mistake Izzy

    omg thank you for understanding whew I thought you thought that webtoons that are usually made by one or a small group of people should be criticized for every ounce of creative though that went into it

    Aslanvicchan July 14, 2021 5:25 pm
    LMAO it’s the fact that you can’t realize that he only agreed to date so that he wouldn’t leave his life so basically treat their relationship as still growing (as you can see he is starting to ACTUALLY d... Cori

    I'll still read it because I think the story is still good ^^) And this is how 'I' see the story so you don't have to be mad abt my opinion.

    Cori July 14, 2021 7:21 pm
    I'll still read it because I think the story is still good ^^) And this is how 'I' see the story so you don't have to be mad abt my opinion. Aslanvicchan

    cool