Hey I wrote a short story , I feel like I need your holy critique on it~ “Oinky poinky “said the pig Stop pissING ON ME cried the fence The pig snorted shakin his head “Noink noink I won’t” Oh wait .. this.. this feels kinda good !! SIKE BITCH TAKE THIS WHizzZz ; creamed the fence . The naughty pig died of electrocution :”/
Hey I wrote a short story , I feel like I need your holy critique on it~
“Oinky poinky “said the pig
Stop pissING ON ME cried the fence
The pig snorted shakin his head
“Noink noink I won’t”
Oh wait .. this.. this feels kinda good !!
SIKE BITCH TAKE THIS WHizzZz ; creamed the fence .
The naughty pig died of electrocution :”/