*nervous laugh* ehem
What part of my comment made you nervous ? ;)
*deep breath* do you want brutal honesty or public appropriate response? ****////THE SMIRK THO, YA KNOW I'M DYING OVER HERE SIR, MA'AM, CAPTAIN
Miss me with the public appropriate shit i want the tea (: i mean i can guess what it's about !
I liked the performance of the seme in the story cuz I would have wanted to be dominated anytime I did something wrong... Like I could trust someone to keep my control other than me, that'd be nice, ya know? Being a rebel is liberating, true, but that doesn't mean lines should be crossed
Gaaah I dunno... I just ... It would be nice to rely on a stronger power once you realise it's, well, it is correctly directed (?)
I understand that you hated that the dom just up and did it but it looked cool... My opinions are hardly articulated gah sorry (´ . . . `)
Plus you mentioned you were a dom so I got reeled up- MAJORLY CURIOUS- but yah... Um... Ya...
You sound like a good girl,boy, person (: a nice and obedient sub is such a refreshing thing to see, lovely ~
However i didn't necessarily hate the dom's behaviours because i'm a dom myself and i would've been more brutal with someone as rebellious as the kid in the story ! However it just made me uncomfortable that they made the sub and dom thing forced, like he didn't have a choice but to submit to him and that his dom was chosen randomly for him
As a sub you should understand the difference between you wanting to be dominated and the kid in the story being kind of raped in the first 2 chapters +-+
But again it might be me overthinking because i'm so sensitive when it comes to sub's consent and mental health as i feel it's my responsibility in a way XD
So yeah I know it was all great and they were safe and all BUT i have two main big issues that i'd like to express :
Firstly i don't appreciate how the dom sub thing works ! It felt forced and rapey at the beginning ! And i understand this type of thing is similar to omegaverse but that's also kind of rapey ! I am a dom but i wouldn't just force someone to submit to me because they're a sub ! That's hella messed up
Secondly why the fuck did he have to say that the sub reminded him of his dog ? It was just so nasty and made me feel uncomfortable thinking that he would think of his dead dog while fucking him #－.－) that being said i enjoy pet play but not thinking of ACTUAL animals lol
Other than that the story was lovely