the plot and pacing of this story is not really good
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ngl sumi is dumb af like he’s pmo with how dumb and shitty he is lmao how...
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Sumi literally pissed me off. He doesnt deserve an amazing dude like Utou. ...
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I need more of this kind of plot. So much pain but in the end they got thei...
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That was really messy :(
Disclaimer, I know that some people like this and I'm not shitting on your tastes, this is just me saying my thoughts! (fo the people maybe wondering if they want to read this)
I think there was too unnecessary drama??? Don't get me wrong, the story was beautifully narrated and the art was really good, but it was too dramatic and angsty for literally no reason other than to be more dramatic. Like was it really not enough pain for the uke to be raped once, he had to be raped like 3 times?? While being unable to mate with the one you really love and also mate with someone else in a whim?? + Shorten his life for undoing it? I mean... Also the twins stuff was just overkill. This manga is the definition of pick a struggle, not my cup of tea at all, but at the end i still read it for closure, glad they had a happy ending at least