It felt rushed.

Arsenz47 June 29, 2021 8:03 pm

Where's the missing sister? What happend to the killer who poisoned herself? It was a slow burn and the mini detective episodes was nice but it escalated so fast when it reached the end. Don't get me wrong, it was nice but where are the extras/afterword T^T

Responses
    Pastel Star July 2, 2021 10:01 am

    I’m pretty sure the sister is dead I’m just sad that they didn’t find her body.

    Arsenz47 July 2, 2021 10:03 am
    I’m pretty sure the sister is dead I’m just sad that they didn’t find her body. Pastel Star

    Yeah, I was like shouldn't her brother look for her body at least ( ̄∇ ̄"). It ended at an awkward moment lol

    Pastel Star July 2, 2021 10:13 am
    Yeah, I was like shouldn't her brother look for her body at least ( ̄∇ ̄"). It ended at an awkward moment lol Arsenz47

    This story had potential to be more but I guess the author didn’t want to flesh it out and ruin it