listen, author. i will not read this shit properly if u aint even giving kile the spotligh...

toki June 28, 2021 10:30 pm

listen, author. i will not read this shit properly if u aint even giving kile the spotlight that he deserves. i skimmed through the whole thing expecting kile to be you know.. THE MAIN CHARACTER! and you’re hinting that THAT piece of garbage is a pOtEnTial LOvE IntErEsT? nobody in this story treats kile like a separate individual. they’re always ray this, ray that. MAN FUCK ALL OF YOU

and also the fact that a lot of readers are just skimming through this story says a lot

Responses
    ala July 3, 2021 10:45 pm

    honestly i get why people are mad like the story is a lot about ray but as a person that has a brother and is close i feel the story is really showing the nature of siblings being close but having completely different lives and the fact no one is treating him as his own person really displays the living in your brothers shadow i’m very positive all the ray crap is part of kiles development as a person and character the story really does a nice job showing the relationship of brothers that people make out to be a race but with that being said i’m very mad at lou his “feelings” for kile aren’t real he only is that way cause of his feelings for ray i have no idea if ray even comes back to life if that happens i just have a feeling things are going to be messy

    chachacha July 3, 2021 11:53 pm
    honestly i get why people are mad like the story is a lot about ray but as a person that has a brother and is close i feel the story is really showing the nature of siblings being close but having completely di... ala

    so true