This is just tiring to read. It's like BJ Alex but instead of a likable main character, he's a pushover and trying so hard to be cute. Also they're talking about blackmail and shit liek it's not that big of a deal. Your readers shouldn't be disappointed and tired 4 chapters in.
This is just tiring to read.
It's like BJ Alex but instead of a likable main character, he's a pushover and trying so hard to be cute. Also they're talking about blackmail and shit liek it's not that big of a deal. Your readers shouldn't be disappointed and tired 4 chapters in.