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Bitch…as if my reading history is just beefy x beefy? As if yaoi hasn’t had rape and sex without plot stories for decades when it was just gangly twunks x petite, and I should know as I mostly grew up with those stories. As if I even said I disliked this story or planned on dropping it just off one critique. You are making a whole lot of assumptions based on limited knowledge all because of one stranger’s comments, like why you pressed? If you enjoy the story so much my minor critique shouldn’t interrupt your bliss, idk why you have to make it weird
Like, yes the sex is hot and everything but…it feels so shallow and empty cause the characters don’t really know each other and have misunderstandings between them, and I find this happening a lot in yaoi. One or two sex scenes initially is pretty cool (unless it’s out of nowhere and/or coerced), but when they start actually catching feelings and don’t even try to have one convo the sex starts getting repetitive and hallow cause nothing’s outwardly changed on their relationship, and then I find the sex boring. If you’re gonna have a smutty romance you need to actually…develop the romance, make us believe in it and want them to be together, show us the chemistry Σ(っ°Д °;)っI’d feel more satisfied if they just laid on the bed and have an actual conversation than what’s currently happening, but that’s just me ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍