Where is this story even going now? It started out well and just fell flat...

Zenin Maki (禪院 真希) June 28, 2021 2:30 pm

Where is this story even going now? It started out well and just fell flat...

Responses
    awtumm June 28, 2021 5:28 pm

    it gets better tho
    i mean you need some conflict too and gotta make that title make sense

    Zenin Maki (禪院 真希) June 28, 2021 5:35 pm

    It just got soooo slow at some point and then just dipped and stayed there... I'll let it run for a few more vhapters then check it out. I'll take your advice

    awtumm June 28, 2021 5:41 pm
    It just got soooo slow at some point and then just dipped and stayed there... I'll let it run for a few more vhapters then check it out. I'll take your advice Zenin Maki (禪院 真希)

    the novel is 135 chapters long so it's gonna take its time but trust me it gets better after some angst

    jjlar June 28, 2021 7:19 pm
    the novel is 135 chapters long so it's gonna take its time but trust me it gets better after some angst awtumm

    Oooo can u spoil for me

    露西 June 28, 2021 10:12 pm
    Oooo can u spoil for me jjlar

    spoilers !!



    asher will confront remington about what happened and they’ll take a break, but they’ll get back together soon after