If this was by a more experienced artist, the excecution would have been much better and the story easier to follow. So far, these two stories are not laid out well enough at the beginning of the chapters to actually make me invested in the characters.
Smut and yaoi combo is great and all, but there are so many artists who can execute a perfect balance between the two. This one needs more experience.
IMO the art is pretty enough. But more than being an artist, I think the mangaka should polish her writing skills, or perhaps get someone to write for her i guess...
If this was by a more experienced artist, the excecution would have been much better and the story easier to follow. So far, these two stories are not laid out well enough at the beginning of the chapters to actually make me invested in the characters.
Smut and yaoi combo is great and all, but there are so many artists who can execute a perfect balance between the two. This one needs more experience.