Sorry but there is something wrong with this story like it feels artificial and did the author wrote this while having writer's block? None of the conversations feels natural, everytime I try to read their convos I felt no emotion, everything feels robotic like the lines were written by an AI (no it's not the translator, cuz then I would've just said it read like google translate but it doesn't read like that at all, the translator did a good job)
Like the whole atmosphere, the story, everything feels superficial, there's not much plot going on, the characters don't feel real because there's literally nothing in them, no discernable personalities. I keep grasping at something this webtoon has to offer, but it's just bland. It's like eating an unseasoned chicken.
The point is, one example of why it feels unnatural is when the FL deliberately went to the shoe shop knowing full well the owner will harrass her. Nobody does that in real life, and it wasn't like getting a shoe is urgent especially since she was already wearing one. It's not like undergarments where you have to keep changing it everyday. Anyways, I stopped at chapter 7 cuz I personally think it's not worth continuing. I hope the author practices characterization and listening to actual irl conversations instead like when with friends. This is a common beginner writer mistake, it would do them well if they interact with more people.
Sorry but there is something wrong with this story like it feels artificial and did the author wrote this while having writer's block? None of the conversations feels natural, everytime I try to read their convos I felt no emotion, everything feels robotic like the lines were written by an AI (no it's not the translator, cuz then I would've just said it read like google translate but it doesn't read like that at all, the translator did a good job)
Like the whole atmosphere, the story, everything feels superficial, there's not much plot going on, the characters don't feel real because there's literally nothing in them, no discernable personalities. I keep grasping at something this webtoon has to offer, but it's just bland. It's like eating an unseasoned chicken.
The point is, one example of why it feels unnatural is when the FL deliberately went to the shoe shop knowing full well the owner will harrass her. Nobody does that in real life, and it wasn't like getting a shoe is urgent especially since she was already wearing one. It's not like undergarments where you have to keep changing it everyday. Anyways, I stopped at chapter 7 cuz I personally think it's not worth continuing. I hope the author practices characterization and listening to actual irl conversations instead like when with friends. This is a common beginner writer mistake, it would do them well if they interact with more people.