I like it.

Utena22 June 24, 2021 5:32 am

I really enjoyed the characters and story. Craig and Dean are adorable when they're together. I honestly didn't expect that diving into this. I thought this was going to be about how fucked up the relationship is and situation is. And how these two characters are obviously not right for each other but still end up together regardless. The seme usually being very aggressive/abuse to the uke. The uke having low self esteem and cant find himself to leave the seme because he is just so hot and just cant resist him. But I was pleasantly surprised. I love this couple and how adorable they are with each other. My main complaint is that the relationship felt a little rushed. I wish we could've seen these two get to know each other a little more. I felt that the Dean opened up a little to quickly to a stranger he just met not too long ago. I think that if he was a little more caution and cold with Craig at first and as he got to know him, he would started to open up as time goes by it would make a bit of a difference. Feel a bit natural, you know? And I feel as though they could have develop the side characters a bit more like the female president, the father and maybe Theo. Cause my god I hated that brat. Not as much though. But what do I know! Im not a writer. This is just my opinion and regardless I still really like this. Comment below and tell me what you think! Do you agree/disagree?

Responses
    Ayu_chan June 25, 2021 3:18 pm

    I didn't feel like Dean opened Up too quickly, actually i think that was because maybe Dean fell on love at first sight when he saw Craig. Ngl i thought this was gonna be a sad story and i had a sour taste in my mouth when i started reading it if you know what i mean (*killing stalking war flashbacks*) I was really surprised when i saw how fluffy the story actually was(~▰˘◡˘▰)~I'm happy i decided to read this :DD

    Utena22 June 25, 2021 6:55 pm
    I didn't feel like Dean opened Up too quickly, actually i think that was because maybe Dean fell on love at first sight when he saw Craig. Ngl i thought this was gonna be a sad story and i had a sour taste in m... Ayu_chan

    Dude. Same here with the (*Killing Stalking war flashbacks*).(⊙…⊙ )

    Ayu_chan June 27, 2021 4:16 am
    Dude. Same here with the (*Killing Stalking war flashbacks*).(⊙…⊙ ) Utena22

    HAHA I HATE MYSELF I KEEP READING SAD STUFF and I'm really weird bc I'm unable to stop reading something like I force myself to read the whole thing for some obscure unknown reason, (unless it's incredibly boring) and like I DON'T WANNA BE SAD ANYMORE. I JUST WANNA BE HORNKY

    Utena22 July 20, 2023 8:52 pm
    HAHA I HATE MYSELF I KEEP READING SAD STUFF and I'm really weird bc I'm unable to stop reading something like I force myself to read the whole thing for some obscure unknown reason, (unless it's incredibly bori... Ayu_chan

    Its been years. But I just noticed your profile...

    Ayu_chan July 21, 2023 2:16 am
    Its been years. But I just noticed your profile... Utena22

    ...my profile?? what do you mean

    Utena22 July 21, 2023 7:04 am
    ...my profile?? what do you mean Ayu_chan

    Dude... you have a Boku no Pico profile.

    Ayu_chan July 22, 2023 6:32 am
    Dude... you have a Boku no Pico profile. Utena22

    HAHAHA YOU'RE SO RIGHT WHAT I'm so sorry I'm not into it at all, i think i set it like that as a joke maybe 4 years ago when i made this account and totally forgot this whole time thank you for reminding me

    Utena22 July 23, 2023 4:38 am
    HAHAHA YOU'RE SO RIGHT WHAT I'm so sorry I'm not into it at all, i think i set it like that as a joke maybe 4 years ago when i made this account and totally forgot this whole time thank you for reminding me Ayu_chan

    Hehehe it's no problem ( ̄∇ ̄")