This story is all over the place…The pacing is weird, the characters are uninteresting and I’m drowning in cliches in every chapter This is what happens when you frankenstein together every trope from popular stories. 1. FL who is “different from other girls”—a beauty that beats men up 2. A ML who is a stoic, manly knight and essentially falls in love at first sight 3. A pseudo cinderella tale (if that makes sense) 4. A fucking vampire for some reason???? LOL.. Theres so many stories that do every element of this one WAY better. It feels like this story tried to do every, but failed spectacularly and did nothing lmfao. I read like 13 chapters and usually by that point I’m invested in a story, but I’m just not feeling this one.
Lol... don't forget about the furry wolfie♡... And the misunderstandings are passing me off.. Even so, I still gonna read this to see what author gonna do with all these elements and misunderstandings piling up like the Mt.Everest.
This story is all over the place…The pacing is weird, the characters are uninteresting and I’m drowning in cliches in every chapter This is what happens when you frankenstein together every trope from popular stories. 1. FL who is “different from other girls”—a beauty that beats men up 2. A ML who is a stoic, manly knight and essentially falls in love at first sight 3. A pseudo cinderella tale (if that makes sense) 4. A fucking vampire for some reason???? LOL.. Theres so many stories that do every element of this one WAY better. It feels like this story tried to do every, but failed spectacularly and did nothing lmfao. I read like 13 chapters and usually by that point I’m invested in a story, but I’m just not feeling this one.