Is this good?

Blcklights June 22, 2021 6:38 pm

Is this good?

Responses
    Jitius-blue June 23, 2021 6:14 am

    Nope, its poorly written
    But Ive seen worse

    Kacos_34 June 29, 2021 3:35 pm

    It’s more of your basic, “the world ends RPG style but I was unprepared and just as I was able to meet my end, I found myself back to the time before the world ended! Now I can prepare and become the strongest player in order to protect myself or friend/family member/loved one” even though we’re seeing a lot of these more often, I still like this one. The style is colorful and instead of strength or an omnipotent op mc, this one is more focused on a support hero, I think it should be interesting

    Layla September 29, 2023 6:50 am

    Yeah everything kacos said but too much frustration for the reader if you go through any of the fight scenes. This guy fights without any clear strategy & simply wins by luck sometimes (⊙…⊙ )