Chile I accidentally checked the spoiler box thingy
Isn’t your ending terrible ? ;p
There are some nice idea, but it could be opening horizons about life possibilities
for exemple, i dislike the one sided self sacrifice, that is not love, it’s egomania ! You don’t make choices for your loved ones, as long as they can still choose for themselves !
no one can know someone else’s condition for success and happiness - social standards changed through time, and in any case, can only be one type of standard - some people will prefer, freedom or adventure (travels), creativity (artists), living in nature or lot of encounters, love or family (sometimes with many kids), god or charity - there are many other paths than money and a « good situation « with a standard house and a dog to walk in the park
Search a bit ! There are so many ways !
It’s not like power, money and shopping for useless stuff can ever bring fulfillment or wholesomeness - they are tools at best, and chains at worse
I thought this story was going to turn out so differently. Like this had a lot of potential, but in the end the way it was wrote and paced just ruined it. Though don't get me wrong, its still a good story it just could have been way better.
Like imagine the omega training and becoming badass and if they had explained the fact that they can't be together earlier in the story and they got in an argument and took a break. And during the break the alpha regrets things that happened in their relationship and feels guilty and angry at himself and then they resolve the problem and get back together.
Then they try to think of a way that they can be together, but the omega realizes that it isn't possible because if he ran away with him it would just ruin things for the alpha. And the omega slowly starts to think that he is just holding him back so, he runs away from the school with the other omega (sorry I'm confused with the names they keep changing them) so they can make their own choices.
And then police come to the alphas school because they suspect that he could have took him but he didn't and had no idea he had run away and is devistated and tries looking for him and then later finds a letter in his drawer that the omega left him. Then in the end the
alpha never finds him and lives the rest of his life missing him and wishing he could have changed things and wishing that the world wasn't so unfair and that maybe he'll meet him in his next life and that they'll finally be together or for y'all people who don't like sad endings they end up together and live happily every after yay... Damn i just made a whole god damn plot is this even the same story?