The main couple had some cute moments and the concept of the story is actually good but th...

Hachin June 19, 2021 6:11 pm

The main couple had some cute moments and the concept of the story is actually good but there were a few inconsistencies concerning exactly what happened in the past: whether he was dragged off or followed the guy into that room and whether he was unconscious when discovered by his hyung or whether the other ml found him and helped him out through acting.

And at the beginning of the story, it just felt as if everyone was taking advantage of the Mogyum, even the other ML. I wish Mogyum had a bit more character as well. He just went along and let himself be pushed by every character and the story basically carried him and he let himself be draggeda along.

The second relationship rubs me wrong as well, cause that black haired guy obviously has a thing for vulnerable/broken boys and now that his step Bro lost everything, he's just realising that he's got a crush on him? And the pink haired step Bro was doing therapy and the doc told his step Bro not to approach him to stop setting him off but step Bro selfishly ignored that and said fk his mental health, I want to him now.

I would have been happier with pink haired guy taking some time to get his brain in order cause he needs to deal with whatever the fuck made him try and commit murder twice. And while the concept of pink hair getting together with his manager is cute, the drunken sex scene doesn't scream most healthy relationship, considering the dubious consent situation.

Anyway, it was still a nice read, I just wanted to voice the few things that bothered me. This would he so much cooler if chamin's ability had a more prominent role. I would have loved more scenes where he sits around and tells Mogyum about all the people around them, just to entertain him.

Responses
    packgoat June 20, 2021 1:54 am

    right like the 2nd "couple" just wasn't giving! seeing your thoughts on Mogyum, i now wish the author spent all the writing on Mogyum's character instead cuz that would've completed the webtoon with a high note

    Hachin June 20, 2021 7:34 am
    right like the 2nd "couple" just wasn't giving! seeing your thoughts on Mogyum, i now wish the author spent all the writing on Mogyum's character instead cuz that would've completed the webtoon with a high note packgoat

    That would have been great actually. If we totally ignore the second couple and focus more on the first couple and actually let Mogyum do something to be an active part in the story, that would have made for a way more interesting plot tbh