Cretienne (?)

mfc June 14, 2021 1:49 am

Ngl, she doesn't seem like a villain like she's just pathetic

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    TwistedCupid June 14, 2021 2:04 am

    She is the NON-SEQUITUR character... like how and who is she? Did she kill her dad? No, she's 12! So what does this have to do with who murdered her dad and bothers? Is she finding out who they are? Who her father's friends and foes are? What he does for a living? Nope... let's be mean to a pianist and a kid for confusing and plotless reason. The ML is doing a better job on finding out what is going on.

    Someone June 14, 2021 3:33 am
    She is the NON-SEQUITUR character... like how and who is she? Did she kill her dad? No, she's 12! So what does this have to do with who murdered her dad and bothers? Is she finding out who they are? Who her fat... TwistedCupid

    But but I thought she was trying to make folk songs more popular because in her first time line of someone sang those songs they would be executed and it’s not as bad right now but still isn’t pleasant in the eyes/ears of many

    TwistedCupid June 14, 2021 4:16 am
    But but I thought she was trying to make folk songs more popular because in her first time line of someone sang those songs they would be executed and it’s not as bad right now but still isn’t pleasant in t... Someone

    So does that mean that her father was a folk singer? Is that how her father was killed? Can you imagine the father going up on stage playing folk music? Does that make sense? We don't know why he was murdered, I don't think it's because he decided to break out into country music. Does the father own a banjo? Nope nope... So that's why this doesn't make any sense. Why does her family become a target? Who framed her father? What happened to her brother's? Who killed them? Those are things we should be finding out along with her as an audience.

    Someone June 14, 2021 9:33 pm
    So does that mean that her father was a folk singer? Is that how her father was killed? Can you imagine the father going up on stage playing folk music? Does that make sense? We don't know why he was murdered, ... TwistedCupid

    I sorry you sound really angry (T ^ T)so I’m not trying to argue but it was something really important to her in her first time line and was kinda the reason she’s back and I think she feels some power thing when she sings and maybe the big whale thing can help her look ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍

    TwistedCupid June 14, 2021 10:05 pm
    I sorry you sound really angry (T ^ T)so I’m not trying to argue but it was something really important to her in her first time line and was kinda the reason she’s back and I think she feels some power thin... Someone

    Oh I'm sorry. I'm just bold. Although I am frustrated. I like the Fluffy family moments and her being smart but I also liked the mystery and her playing detective but it just seems to be about her looking cute and guys stalking her. ... and her magic singing? It seems that the family mystery had become a mcduffin. I am starting to get frustrated with the story veering off the mystery... and lack of family. ( ̄ε(# ̄)Σ

    Someone June 14, 2021 10:12 pm
    Oh I'm sorry. I'm just bold. Although I am frustrated. I like the Fluffy family moments and her being smart but I also liked the mystery and her playing detective but it just seems to be about her looking cute ... TwistedCupid

    Ye I get it (=´∀`) the mystery that was so involved at first got lost and now it feels like we’re skipping out on it ( also is it just me or are the chapters getting increasingly short? Like the chapters are gorgeous but like less and less plot is coming out each chapter?)