i agree entirely. i thought that it was a little suspicious because blond dude started to come onto FL more after he overhead her say something about that og clara liked him. also her approach to everything is a little naive and a little stupid? like in that chapter when she asked the maids to see her brother and they clearly told her that he was in a meeting, why would she go in?? like yes, gain influence, but that was just unnecessarily disruptive and rude and then when he kicked her out she was like "oh boohoo he sees me as a nuisance" like NO you shouldn't have interrupted. definitely dropping this, FL bothers me too much.
yeh i see where ur coming from on this, she really does lack consciousness of her actions and doesn’t properly think through situations. as you said, when she disrupted their meeting because she wanted to see him was too naive and just plain stupid, which is also another reason i’m dropping this. i would’ve been fine if she lacked detail in her design and appearance but she also lacks the capability to understand situations and to be able to judge actions, people and scenarios. she doesn’t have any remarkable or memorable personality traits or skills that could be seen as unique and interesting, nor does she hold any intellectual higher standing, she’s just to boring and seems to have less interesting traits than the other characters even though she is the MC.
i’m gonna give my honest review here so please don’t get angry ( ˊ˂˃ˋ )
the characters all together are a 5/10, which in general sucks.
the mc has an interesting goal which is great, she wishes to protect her brother while also saving the person who could be her demise in the future. she’s quite understandable and relatable but i find it a bit boring how she seems to be developing feeling for the very same reason for her demise all because of his sweet looks. i understand her thought process of, “if i treat him kindly and help release him everything may be okay” but she must be wary of him as he could be using her obvious care and consideration for him as a means to escape and/or betray her. i mean, we’ve yet to full dive into his true character and have only seen fragments thus far, so he could be a snake for all we know.
The Brother
: i’m not going to lie, i like him. i enjoy his character even though it’s lowkey shit. he could’ve been a real brother to the original which is disappointing but it seems he knows that he’s neglected her so i appreciate how he’s trying his best to look after her and take the negative influences around her away for now. i like how he’s relatively soft around her compared to his vassals. other than his relationship with his sister, i think he needs some type of development, even if it’s small. his behaviour negatively impacts the country, he needs to thoroughly and concisely make better decisions that won’t put his country and his citizens in danger, he must also try and gain the trust of his citizens as they seem to view him as “a tyrant that makes their lives difficult”. so yeh he needs development both communication wise as well as personality wise.
The art
is not impressive, i like the brothers design but all the other characters are mediocre and plain. they don’t particularly have any details that are noteworthy or considerably interesting. even the main character has nothing really distinctive about her design which i’m a bit disappointed in as she is the main character of this story (not the novel she’s in lol). it also doesn’t help that almost every chapter is in the worst quality.
the translations
as much as i appreciate the updates, i’m only up to ch 10 and i’m considering dropping it due to the quality of the uploads and panels, but also the translations. if the uploads were clearer and the tls were less choppy then i’d consider staying to continue this series but unfortunately not. thank you for you work until now, i hope the TL take some this last paragraph into consideration and improves their works if they plan on doing more than one project, bye bye!╰(*´︶`*)╯♡