
You know though this may not relate totally to the plot I just wanna share my opinion...
First off, I reall wanna thanks sensei for putting effort for this manga must've been tiring for u.
Second, though the story plot line is somewhat questionable. I feel that the characters gave off a feel of real couple. (Of course not for the profession they may work at..)
But I'm only stating this comment cuz I am drawing and writing my own little mini comics as well... (Not here to sell my self)
But I understand the meaning of being a mangaka and in saying this when coming up with ideas for plot line... Characters, style.. Etc... It's difficult
More difficult if any I mean any people were to be JUDGE and CRITICISED only on their first few releases...
I mean that's harsh isn't? Just think about it like... Isn't?
(Just wanna share, don't fucking rip me off Seriously!!!)

It's okay. I really get what you conveyed up there. But since I don't have that talent, all I can do from now on is keep cheering you (and others too). It's not much, I know, but I appreciate people with your talent. I mean it's not easy, I even try drawing at this age which I suck badly since I was a kid. So yeah..don't stress yourself much about those who loves to pass judgment. Keep doing what makes you happy. If you got a group of fans who understand you and loves your works, I think that's enough for a long run.
p/s - this is not related but I can be judgy sometimes which I'm trying to change over the years. It's kinda hard because I grew up and meeting up with people (irl) who are so judgemental or loves to make comparisons or ridicule me to no end or all of it in one go. So being a Libra, I did the exact same thing to them or taking my sweet time before I drop the bomb. It's bad I know, but that's one of many ways to survive in this messed up societies.

Thanks I really get u.... My drawing sucks even though I'm a creative person... Sigh... I used to compare myself with a friend of mine whose talent is so superior I burn jealous out of me... In the end all it did was burn out the fuel out of me...
P/s: I used to be influence by judgement due to influences I learn but as I have gotten older and more personal spaces... I really understand that's not me. Since I can't judge easily unless all information are there equally. Pp/s: Wow cool, I'm s And being a I am literally known as judgement by my mother... Sigh~~~~ I ain't, I know myself well...
It's okay though to be judgy... Because it'll depend. I always say this (IRL) it is all grey and depend nothing is ever sure or unsure it's just is... And if you are the type to change for greater than its great because it's your choice... Ppl/s: This is one of my many motto; "Choice = Life"... Well that's me btw...
Oh! Just about to forget...
Nice to meet you too...
I read this for the 2nd time, after I come across with Kuroneko and read them all again. I know negative comments/feelings about this Manga are everywhere, but lets give yourself a few minutes to think. This is the mangaka's first two BL Manga, a spin-off from Nekoka the Shounen Ai. The first BL (which is Nekoka the spin-off) was already a bit lovey-dovey but that's because the Nurse/Govt-HumanAgent is a kind and warm person to begin with, which we knew from the main story. So perhaps the mangaka wanna go with the typical popular characters of a Sadistic Seme and Meekly Uke from the old times (which lets face it, especially popular in Shoujo hero/heroin..urghhhh), so hence the story we all get.
To be fair, both this and the Nekoka the spin-off have a story & character development but not in pars with Kuroneko (which comes later and a much more popular series). Also, Tanaka's personality was slightly hinted in the main story, which in here it goes all out. But of course if we're to choose, we go for that Nekoka the spin-off instead of this one right? So let it be, as it's just one tiny probs from the mangaka's first attempted in BL. Plus there are others that are so much worse than this, which I can't stomach at all..especially from Shoujo (oh Lord help me!).
C'mon lets us read Kuroneko for some happy-to-emotional feelings and great sex ლ(´ڡ`ლ) to slip this off our minds. LOL! It's a good materials for *cough* mas......*cough* too, apparently ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ