Wait hold on. Are you trying to say the second one is more rape than the first one? Cause if so how? The second one has only had them have sex in dreams while the first one was them having sex irl while the chick was under hypnosis.
I think it’s because she’s a bit more agressive overall I mean she kept him asleep for two days
The hypnosis only triggers their biggest desires without the other person realizing it, it doesn't make them crave the person if they didn't want them (from what I understood)
In the first one, the FL admitted liking the ML by the time they started having physical sex. It's not that she didn't want it, she was just feeling uncomfortable at the thought of being controlled in when they would have sex.
While in the second one, the succubi even used the hypnosis trigger in the dreams and it just feels like the human was more forced because of how obssesive the succubi is irl and is essentially throwing himself at him while they put a cover over it with her confidence and her being older...?
Mentally, even if I switched the gender roles on either story, the second one just isn't my cup of tea. Idk if that made sense.
I think that was more of an accident that seemed to get out of her control
I understand it not being your cup of tea; however, the second one is quite obviously less rapey than the first one.
While the hypnosis does help a person realize their desires, if not under it then the first couple would not have had sex when they did. It is still a form of mind control.
Whereas the second couple has only been the equivalent of intense wet dreams. The dreams don't seem forced at all as they simply start out as seduction. The recent one was more forced with the train groping and then hypnosis (which I don't condone). Later in the dream tho, Hyeseong's eyes went back to normal so it wore off and he continued on his on.
All in all that was still a dream and Taeyi has backed off irl and has not been throwing herself at him for a while. She hss not touched him sexually irl. They had a consensual kiss but we're both fully conscious and I believe Hyeseong initiated.
The first story, the first time they had sex was basically coerced with the use of hypnosis. The FL was ok with it. (Mainly because she did like him but also her memories were hazy about details after) but when she learned that he was hypnotizing her she was disturbed and avoided him.
And in the event of switching the genders, nothing changes. The situations are still the same. One was irl coercion, the other was in a dream. Personally, I'd rather be coerced in a dream than irl.
I feel like the first story's ending was too rushed. I liked the couple and the side characters were good too, I kinda wanted to see the FL journey in gaining her confidence and incubus' process of turning human.
Meanwhile the second story seems dragged, I like the idea of the dynamic but the FL seems too superficial to me. And it's also a bit more on the rape side.... but then again it's about incubi and succubi, so idk if I can really judge it on that aspect.