This is sort of all over the place. I appreciate what the MC is going for? And the art is ...

LucyC June 8, 2021 11:45 pm

This is sort of all over the place. I appreciate what the MC is going for? And the art is gorgeous. I think just her being the most perfect angelic being ever...that's boring. There's no clear direction; theres an end goal but it gets bounced around. And I'm still mad they made her skinny. Like c'mon the whole fat = evil trope is bullshit.

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    CuteCumber June 9, 2021 2:10 am

    i think she shouldve stayed slim thicc LMAO like not to the point of obese but where she still has some thicc areas

    Hyacinth June 9, 2021 3:21 am

    Totally agreed. About not having a plot and her body too.
    "I became the ugly duckling/lady" yeah sure... For 1 day?
    Not only the plot doesnt make sense but the title neither.
    Also who tf is the male lead? Bc all the male characters are drawn as feminine or simply ugly that neither of them are suited for romance--
    (The artist wants too much. I know the art is supposed to be pretty and the artist tries giving as many details as she can, but it would be much better if she made expressive facial expressions, rather than details. It reminds me of baroque arts: too much. I see its values and the talent in them, but its just too much. --anyways i dont try to trash-talk the artist if anyone wants to lecture me about that. It was an honest, professional observation, cut short. I'd still enjoy the manhwa with this art (art was never a stopping point for me) and i also see developments in expressiveness too. So yeah)

    LucyC June 9, 2021 4:39 am
    Totally agreed. About not having a plot and her body too."I became the ugly duckling/lady" yeah sure... For 1 day?Not only the plot doesnt make sense but the title neither.Also who tf is the male lead? Bc all t... Hyacinth

    That's a really valid criticism though! You're right in that it is a bit much. Combined with the all over translations, it ends up making the story even less cohesive.
    I'm also convinced there is no ML; I think it might be going for a reverse harem?
    There is a lot of potential in the art and the series; it just needs to trim out some things.

    Hyacinth June 9, 2021 9:54 pm
    That's a really valid criticism though! You're right in that it is a bit much. Combined with the all over translations, it ends up making the story even less cohesive. I'm also convinced there is no ML; I think... LucyC

    Yeah. I meet stories like that so many times. That has great potential but do not grasp it