Umm

Girlyqueengamer June 8, 2021 3:25 am

So far it’s, okay, I’m not sure what’s bothering me but I just can’t find myself being exited for future chapters. The story seems less than ordinary, while I want to read future chapters it feel more like the story just can’t keep my attention. (◞‸◟;)

Responses
    LynSnow June 22, 2021 4:10 pm

    Honestly I think it's because everything is overly explained, there's no thrill because there's no secrets

    CuddleQuill June 23, 2021 2:26 am
    Honestly I think it's because everything is overly explained, there's no thrill because there's no secrets LynSnow

    Well, that's not true, but I get your point.