Hmm just some opinion

Ninanya June 7, 2021 12:17 pm

Ugh its soo all over the place idk what is even going on(bit exaggerated) and the fl is a bit too scared to do stuff its kind of bothering and like cmon if ur in this kind of situation its fight or flight adn do whatever it means to get what u want ( like saving your mother, or making pple less hostile to u etc) its so bothering ヽ(`Д´)ノ

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    Hello DEAR June 7, 2021 12:25 pm

    Just was going to reply harshly but saw "just some opinion" so I won't but please don't judge another person if your not her or at least lived her life

    Ninanya June 7, 2021 2:00 pm
    Just was going to reply harshly but saw "just some opinion" so I won't but please don't judge another person if your not her or at least lived her life Hello DEAR

    Yess that is true but its just a manhwa and its not even inspired from real events as such i think thats a bit too heavy to say?

    emtmomo June 7, 2021 2:47 pm
    Just was going to reply harshly but saw "just some opinion" so I won't but please don't judge another person if your not her or at least lived her life Hello DEAR

    I agree. Her life was full of abuses and being abandoned it must be hard to her back bone can not wait to see her grow

    Penny June 7, 2021 5:34 pm

    I agree there are some legitimate storytelling issues in this work. Its a little patchy in spots and the setup isn't very strong, so a lot of it feels like its coming out of nowhere--which can reflect on the characters, themselves. I'm an amateur writer myself, so I try to applaud when people aren't perfect but are still getting their work out there... but I certainly notice it.