this is so badly written lmao

wait, why? i'm about to read this, i wanna know your thoughts :<

its a bit unrealistic at times but thats only because i have high standards with characters - ive seen yaoi with 10x worse pacing/realistic development with higher ratings anyway. yes, i agree, if the last ~8 chapters were written with a slower pacing and more explanation, it would have been better, but for the rest of the chapters, id say theyre about as good as your average bl so i have no idea where tf ur coming from lol